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because of "uninspired"

Posted 04-05-2013 at 07:58 PM by moudiwort (Werkstattreports)
Received call at 5: 34 p.m.: "Serge?" "Hm?"
"M. is dead!" "Sure, asshole!" "Im so sorry."
"Wait!" I dropped the phone, rolled a Blitz-joint. Stick
From lovely Muang Thai. Shouted: "Gotta pee. Hold on!"
Bathroom no option: stench like hell. Sink does it.
Lighting the stick: "K. what?" It hit me like an angry boot in my face:
"Serge, she died in a car crash this...
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S(w)ing Apocalypso

Posted 04-03-2013 at 08:29 PM by moudiwort (Werkstattreports)
(a lesson in Cockney, syncopation stomp

anf gospel funkified and loopings and infinite regress and Laing's knots)

swing apo-calypso so as sin copa tit sss st o(m)- p me now:

swing sing swing

swing apocalypso, a syncopated stomp, stop me now

Apo- so -ever-

calips-

so

sis

this

it

is:

This is where I'm coming from...
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pesach poem projectiles

Posted 04-01-2013 at 07:30 AM by moudiwort (Werkstattreports)
Updated 04-09-2013 at 05:52 PM by moudiwort (concision)
I.1.: title: [I]In order to exorcise the demons of pesach[/I]
I.2: in nuce: a cross/over attempt combining alf laila wa laila's frame story (according to Sir Richard Burton*) with the Jewish passover folk lore.
I.3: goal: to turn Dunyzade into the paschal lamb
I.4: motivation: because I can (show you)


I.5: show it to us: un p pi tardi!*****

I.6: teasers: (the skeleton roughly sketched.)

a) "Humming soothings to...
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