[Glenn Wright]

Hi, Carl—

This one seems much more obviously to have been about the speaker’s mistress.

I noticed that in the first line, you changed κατ to και. This makes more sense. Was it just a silent emendation? The Perseus Project version gives κατ´ αυ των (which would mean something like “following again [the softly rolling tears]. Your version makes more sense.

I wondered if you rendered δε φίλησα (οr δ´ εφιλησα, as it appears in the Perseus Project version) as “hiding her feelings no more.” I couldn’t figure out the meaning of the two δε constructions in that line.

Nice job! Reminds me of Ophelia’s song in Hamlet.
Glenn