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Sonnet #3 - apartment
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04-29-2012, 02:11 PM
conny
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I love the octet, but some of the sestet is driven by the need to
rhyme i think. fingers/singers seems a clunk to me but i'm sure lots
will love it.
+line 4/5 doesn't seem to make much sense to me. The ocean
and the close are lovely though.
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