Thanks, Bill, for going to this trouble. I haven't had time to read it all yet but it certainly looks intriguing.
I would just suggest, however, that in future you post smaller samples. I think the reason you've had so few responses so far is that scrolling through 8000+ words on the screen is pretty daunting. You could post a thousand words on day 1, and then another thousand on day 2... Just a hint for successful marketing.
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