Thanks Jim, Carl, Julie and Jan,
I'll admit I had been hoping to get a couple more deep dive crits on this, but at its length that's asking a lot. It's experimental and borderline abstract as well. I hope I have given due consideration to my petard. ~,:^)
Rick
Note appendage to the title, which may help with traction...now Expression (Sunset) or The Death of Venus
Last edited by Rick Mullin; 03-31-2024 at 08:24 PM.
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