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Unread 05-01-2012, 09:46 AM
Tim Murphy Tim Murphy is offline
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Of all the sonnets we've seen, this weaves the sentences through the structure best. That's not an easy thing to do. It bespeaks real mastery of the pentameter. I agree with Cathy that this is a little too sweet, but I take my hat off to the poet.
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