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Unread 03-21-2003, 07:55 AM
Rhina P. Espaillat Rhina P. Espaillat is offline
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How clever and snippy and delightful! Love the internal rhymes, the pun on "feet," the use of simple language and many monosyllables, and the good-natured ending that takes only a little bite, but suggests it could have chomped down hard, if it had wanted to. Good for initiating a lesson on the form.
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