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Unread 03-23-2004, 06:28 AM
Tim Murphy Tim Murphy is offline
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This is from a sequence of three sonnets addressed to the poet's lover. She's drinking rum punch, called painkillers, and they come in big frosted tumblers. I was in the bar. Highballs would be an alternate word. I completely agree about line 2, although line 10 is even better.
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