I like it too, with a few reservations,
all pretty fixable i think.
goose down doesn't really glide, esp. in a breeze. it just kinda
gets blown about. thus glide feels a bit rhyme driven. and
above the floor isn't quite right imo. gliding across the
floor maybe, like a swan or something.
and the dust on the floor seems odd. spinning above the dust
sounds a bit of a strange thing to draw attention to.
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