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Unread 04-23-2017, 04:40 PM
William A. Baurle William A. Baurle is offline
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Originally Posted by Michael Ferris View Post
Ah, Bill. It’s my hope, too, that I’m growing a little wiser and not just older. How many poems have I scudded over and failed to get? A barking dog or an empty stomach can render me utterly stupid. But just this morning I re-read a poem and finally got it.

Delight!

Progress…
Indeed! I must have read Eliot's Four Quartets a hundred times in my late teens and early twenties, and hardly understood a thing. Now it seems like every line is crystal clear and heavy with meaning.

However, I still don't grok the title. I know there are four poems, but there are five sections to each poem, hence, wouldn't a better title be Four Quintets ?

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Here's a great poem by a great contemporary poet:

Gospel: Juan

We crossed the border
Hours before dawn
Through a hole
Dug under a fence.

We crossed
Dressed as soldiers,
Faces painted
Mud green

The coyotes
That promised
We’d make it, gave us
A straw broom

To drag behind,
Erasing our tracks.
They gave us meat
Drugged for the dogs.

Farther off,
There were engines,
Voices, a light
That swept the ground.

We crossed
On our bellies.
I wonder
If we’ll ever stand up.

— Tracy K. Smith

**Edited out the TMI.

This poem is part of a series, but I think it works just fine on its own.

I wanted to include another doozy by Smith called "Betty Blue", but I can't find an online version. I highly recommend her book, The Body's Question. Nearly every poem is dynamite.

Last edited by William A. Baurle; 04-24-2017 at 11:11 PM.
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