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Unread 04-22-2012, 11:43 AM
Jerome Betts Jerome Betts is offline
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Fascinating to see what people have made of these particularly arbitrary monosyllabic rhymes assembled by some malicious lexicographer and not taken from a genuine sonnet, which I think would make life easier.

Roger, I thought 'The Trip' was the best of yours, the psychedelic trimmings somehow sorting well with the barmy rhymes. But, unfair to bats! (OK, the one in 'The Trip' has low self-esteem problems.) They're more allied to shrews.

Marion's pieces impose remarkable coherence on the awkward squad of words and the second seems to have taken off with a roar.

Good luck to all.

Last edited by Jerome Betts; 04-22-2012 at 11:44 AM. Reason: Typo
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