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04-24-2017, 08:01 AM
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RCL at Autumn Sky Poetry Daily
Ralph makes a quick turnaround from workshop to pub. Congrats, Ralph.
Cheers,
Greg
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04-24-2017, 08:49 AM
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Ralph, the master of revision. I love "dawn-drawn". Congrats!
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04-24-2017, 09:07 AM
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"Dawn-drawn" is beautiful, but the credit goes to Hopkins, no?
Regardless, congrats Ralph.
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04-25-2017, 05:30 AM
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Congrats, Ralph! Excellent work.
Siham
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04-25-2017, 03:36 PM
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Greg, Aaron P, Aaron N, and Siham, thanks for the good words. Yes, dawn-drawn is borrowed from Hopkins and there’s also a nod to Yeats’s swan in the octave.
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04-26-2017, 09:24 AM
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Nice one, Ralph. Congratulations!
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04-26-2017, 11:24 AM
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Great Ralph!
Funny and well crafted. Not that I would expect anything else.
Bravo!
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04-27-2017, 06:18 PM
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Catherine and Rob, glad it gave you a grin!
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04-27-2017, 06:51 PM
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Love it. And I laughed!
Congrats, Ralph.
Charlotte
PS: And thanks for posting, Gregory!
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05-02-2017, 01:57 PM
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Nicely done, Ralph! I think I missed this in its first incarnation.
Cheers
David
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