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Unread 08-26-2017, 11:19 PM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
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Congrats, Aaron! I like (among other things) the way the fourth line alternates between trimeter and dimeter. Also the voice (as Terese mentioned).
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Unread 08-27-2017, 11:26 AM
Aaron Poochigian Aaron Poochigian is offline
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Thank you, Woody and Martin.

Martin, yes, I wrangled with the fourth lines of the stanzas and finally just decided to let the meter alternate like it wanted.

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