Ah, what on earth?!
Archaic? Beg pardon, but, I guess I merely echo, and where?
Perhaps twas so beautifully executed I had to fault it on L4 which broke down with "eloquent" and "venom" pushed into one another until I am half left choking on that minor detail as if it would make this a veritable winner if only.
And I shall nitpick further with the overabundance of similar end-rhymes, which is not to specs but flows nicely nonetheless.
I like the casual turn in the sestet as per regulation, caught praising it too highly, and left with a raised brow as the sonneteer does exactly what we all prefer, wisely realizing the double-edged assault catches oneself, he settles for glory in lieu of judgment. Or correct me.
Fault me for liking too readily.
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