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Unread 07-06-2017, 10:34 AM
Aaron Poochigian Aaron Poochigian is offline
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Default Most Depressing Poem Ever Written

This thread is indeed a competition. Who can write the most depressing poem?

As a model of a depressing poem here is something by Georgy Ivanov (I want to put the last seven lines on a Hallmark card):

It's good that Russia has no Tsar,
it's good that Russia's just a dream,
it's good that God has disappeared,

that nothing's real, except the stars
in icy skies, the yellow gleam
of dawn, the unrelenting years.

It's good that people don't exist,
that nothingness is all there is,
that life's as dark and cold as this;

until we couldn't be more dead,
nor ever were so dark before,
and no one now can bring us aid,
nor even needs to anymore.
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Unread 07-06-2017, 10:49 AM
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It’s hard to keep up with the cleaning
when something inside you is screaming
that every new breath
takes you closer to death
and your life is bereft of all meaning.
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Unread 07-06-2017, 10:58 AM
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Life is pain,
Then you die.
Do you gain?
No. Why try?
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Unread 07-06-2017, 11:21 AM
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Whoa, not what I expected, but lusciously depressing, nonetheless.

A depressing limerick and a poem in trochaic dimeter--rollicking, ironic depressiveness.
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Unread 07-06-2017, 11:26 AM
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We're literally all going to die.
There is no God and no-one cares.
No deed or word or thought you try
Remotely consoles, absolves, repairs.
We're literally all going to die.
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Unread 07-06-2017, 11:31 AM
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Vlad's challenger

He tried.
He failed.
He died
Impaled.
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Unread 07-06-2017, 11:42 AM
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Let there be light

“I’m God!” screamed the Donald. “You’re mutton!
I’ll boil you alive! I’m a glutton!
You’re nothing but sheep!”
Then the orange-haired creep
Cooked the world as he pushed the red button.
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New poems only, or are previously written but nonetheless depressing poems allowed?
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