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Unread 09-06-2014, 10:20 AM
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The Spider and the Ghost of the Fly
BY VACHEL LINDSAY

Once I loved a spider
When I was born a fly,
A velvet-footed spider
With a gown of rainbow-dye.
She ate my wings and gloated.
She bound me with a hair.
She drove me to her parlor
Above her winding stair.
To educate young spiders
She took me all apart.
My ghost came back to haunt her.
I saw her eat my heart.
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The Vachel Lindsay poem I just posted has echoes of the Mary Howitt poem that Lewis Carroll later parodied. The Howitt poem begins:

"Will you walk into my parlor?" said the spider to the fly;
"'Tis the prettiest little parlor that ever you did spy.
The way into my parlor is up a winding stair,
And I have many pretty things to show when you are there."
"O no, no," said the little fly, "To ask me is in vain,
For who goes up your winding stair can ne'er come down again."
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My Work Among the Insects - Dean Young

The body of the lingerneedle is filled
with hemolymph unconstricted except
for a single dorsal vessel. A ventral
diaphragm bathes the organs of the head,

undulations drawing the fluid back through
tiny holes called ostia aided by the movement
of a Napoleon within each abdominal segment
pacing his Elba exile, muttering la Russie

la Russie as the snow squeaks beneath
his boots. All through the night
the temperature drops but no one
knows where the lingerneedle goes.

Yet it emerges each spring like
a baseball team. Gertrude Stein
may have been referring to this when
she wrote, A hurried heaving is a quartz

confinement, although what we normally think of
as referring is brought into question by her work.
A hive of white suching. At the time
of her death, she owned many valuable

paintings renowned for ugliness.
Gertrude Stein grew up in Oakland
but an Oakland as we know it not. No
plastic bags snagged in the trees. Semi-

automatics had yet to reach the fifth grade.
A person could stand in a field, naked
and singing. Sure, there was blood but
there were rags for wiping up the blood.

Deciduous trees, often confused by California
climes, just bloom whenthehellever like how
people have sex in French movies. Here,
during the cool evenings and hot mid-days,

the mild winters and resistive texts,
the lingerneedle thrives. Upon the ruddy
live oak leaves appears its first instar,
spit-like but changing shortly to a messy lace

erupting into many-legged, heavy-winged
adults that want only to mate. Often in July,
one finds them collapsed in the tub, unable
to gain purchase on the porcelain that seems

to attract them mightily. It is best not
to make everything a metaphor of one's own life
but many have pressed themselves against cool
and smooth, in love and doomed. Truly

the earth hurtles through the cosmos at
an alarming rate. Recent research suggests
a gummy discharge of the mating pair

has promise as an anti-coagulant. Please,
more money is needed. The sun sets. The air
turns chilly and full of jasmine.

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I'm loving these--mostly new to me. Thank you so much.

("California / dimes" in S8 of the Dean Young poem must be a typo for "California / climes", no? It seems unlikely that he's referring to $10 bags of marijuana. It seems to be "dimes" in all the versions I can find online, though.)

Another bee poem, to add to the swarm:


Beelines
by M. A. Griffiths

Out of the drowsing singing vessel

comes the bee in neat-nap velvet,

black and gold, armed as fiercely

as a paladin. She possesses what

I lack, the call of purpose. She mounts

the air, homing in on golden gales

of nectar trails, draws her sisters

to her treasure, dancer in the templed hive,

the singing dome, packed with shining wax

and generation’s curl and clusters.

Out of the droning honeyed vessel

comes the bee, and another and another

on a quest through scented strata,

armed like knights, like amazons.

Out of the sleepy humming vessel

comes the bee, bright with purpose,

fast as a star in her task, emblem

of what I lack. Sister in the wind,

mistress of the sun, small dynamo

of summer. The power that I lack.

Out of the throbbing solar vessel

come the sisters, gold and black.

October 2004

Grasshopper: The Poetry of M A Griffiths, p. 36; although I've edited the above a bit, in light of a hard copy draft her friend David Adkins sent me a photocopy of.


Bees also feature in Griffiths' "Firstborn" (p. 119) and "The Poet's Wife" (p. 246). The latter poem was probably inspired, or at least influenced, by the relationship between Ted Hughes and Silvia Plath (author of the bee poem that Maryann posted above).

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Quote:
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("California / dimes" in S8 of the Dean Young poem must be a typo for "California / climes", no? It seems unlikely that he's referring to $10 bags of marijuana. It seems to be "dimes" in all the versions I can find online, though.)
You're right Julie! Just double-checked my copy of Bender: New and Collected Poems. Cut and pasted this from the web and didn't check it. Have corrected the typo. Thanks.

-Matt
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Three by Ogden Nash:


THE ANT

The ant has made himself illustrious
Through constant industry industrious.
So what?
Would you be calm and placid
If you were full of formic acid?


THE CENTIPEDE

I objurgate the centipede,
A bug we do not really need.
At sleepy-time he beats a path
Straight to the bedroom or the bath.
You always wallop where he's not,
Or, if he is, he makes a spot.


THE WASP

The wasp and all his numerous family
I look upon as a major calamily.
He throws open his nest with prodigality,
But I distrust his waspitality.
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More Nash:

THE FLY

God in His wisdom made the fly
And then forgot to tell us why.


THE TERMITE

Some primal termite knocked on wood
And tasted it, and found it good,
And that is why your Cousin May
Fell through the parlor floor today.
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And Nash again:

THE PRAYING MANTIS

From whence arrived the praying mantis?
From outer space, or lost Atlantis?
I glimpse the grim, green metal mug
That masks this pseudo-saintly bug,
Orthopterous, also carnivorous,
And faintly whisper, Lord deliver us.
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Yeah, it's hard to keep out centipedes when they're not wanted, too, Roger. I do love that poem, though. And Mr. Nash seemed to think it was a "bug". Sigh. English majors.

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Robert Burns' "To a Mouse" is much better known, but he wrote "To a Louse" around the same time, in 1786. (With the subtitle "On Seeing One on a Lady's Bonnet, at Church.) It contains the immortal lines

O wad some Power the giftie gie us
To see oursels as ithers see us!

Here's the whole poem.
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Mr. Nash was right, Julie, since a "bug" is defined as "an insect or other creeping or crawling invertebrate (as a spider or centipede)" in the Merriam-Webster dictionary. "Bug" is a broader term than "insect."
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