Thanks, Nausheen, and thanks, Susan, for your good words. I actually missed seeing this until yesterday, when Ryan Wilson told me about it.
I confess that my not posting had less to do with humility than with the hope that I could get them to fix the two typos first. I e-mailed about them yesterday, but nothing's happened yet.
So I hope readers will mentally fix line 1 to read "And now, presto--the way dreams change, abruptly--" and line 5 to read "Tii.e" as "The."
But I'm very happy to be on Verse Daily, typos notwithstanding