[A. E. Stallings]

Today with a fine sonnet,

Would-be Pastoral Elegy

[David Mason]

And a good use of the death/breath rhyme, I'd say! Bravo Gail.
Dave

[Susan McLean]

Delightful poem. It is a pity about the typo in L4, but it is great to see Gail getting the attention.

Susan

[Terese Coe]

Congratulations, Gail! Neat surprise and irony in L14 really makes this fly.

Terese