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Unread 12-09-2011, 07:53 AM
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Preacher’s Grove
for John Stern

I carried an axe, a whetstone and two files,
not sheaves of poetry but drop-forged steels.
Sixteen, I could have tramped for fifty miles
if not for the blood pooling at my heels.
Mole foam was uninvented, and my boots
were brutal. All my scouts were little brutes,
scraping their knees while tripping over roots.

Recall an earlier day: at age eleven
I shouldered my enormous haversack,
some twenty pounds (the sleeping bag weighed seven.)
The bigger boys carried the heavier loads,
far more than any Tenderfoot could pack.
All of the paths we hiked were logging roads
to reach a campsite I recall as heaven.

It was a grove of virgin Norway pine.
Older, I’d hike alone there, afternoons
when I’d no map and compass course to line,
no Pioneering Merit Badge to teach,
only a switchback trail, a steep incline,
only the chorus of the distant loons—
and all the listeners I longed to reach.
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See separate thread DTH 2
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Unread 12-09-2011, 09:30 AM
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Quick note, John,

Why not post the poems in separate threads in order for us to critique each in its own?

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Shall do, Friend.
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Unread 12-09-2011, 01:59 PM
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John if you would wave your Moderator wand and change the heading of this poem to DTH Poem 1 to correspond with DTH Poem 2. Otherwise this one will disappear downriver.

Then you can wave your wand a second time and disappear THIS blah-blah post and the other superfluous ones.
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I don't recognize the poem but do recognize the poet. This is very accomplished in its form and full of the specific details that give it heft.

Susan
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Unread 12-09-2011, 04:11 PM
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I don't recall having seen this before, but I think it is obvious who the poet is. Good one. Very.
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