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Unread 01-20-2012, 08:06 AM
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Default Orwn in The Nervous Breakdown

You read it here first, folks, (or at least I think I remember reading it!) and now it's published in TNB. Nice work, Orwn.
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Unread 01-20-2012, 08:10 AM
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Excellent, Walter!

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Unread 01-20-2012, 10:18 AM
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That is so excellent, Walter! Congrats!
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One of the most delightful poems I've read (or had read to me) in ages.
Way to go, Walter.

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Terrific and nice to meet you face to face, Walter.

Ain't TNB great!
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Excellent! This one deserved a wider audience! Well done!
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Unread 01-20-2012, 12:11 PM
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Ha, what a great poem, Walter. Congratulations!
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My baby baby baby angel boy!! You know that's my second favourite poem in the whole world - after "POPCORN"!!

That god line "...when god met me" - that's one of the best lines of all time.

Pearl!

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Unread 01-20-2012, 12:40 PM
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I love the "Tags" below the poem: cheese, Mars, poetry, space

~,:^)
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Great, Orwn. But why the title?


I mean, besides it being ridiculous and all.

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