Carol
Now if you'd taken my advice ....
I like the fact that the poem is a wall in itself but not having the version that reached me more deeply (with the forbidden near rhyme) I kknow I have liked it more. It's still very fine.
Janet
Something There Is in Me that Loves a Wall...
It isn't the thrill of scaling it hand over hand
because it's there. It isn't the fear of the fall
with one misstep. It isn't the view of the land
from the conquered height, the bold appraisal of all
that lies without or within. Nor is it the call
of the rarefied air at the top. No gated demesne
tempts me to penetrate; I've no urge to install
new landmarks of my own on an old terrain.
What calls me to walls is the lure of quixotic pain--
the need to dismantle whatever divides the ground,
to try my strength while strength and stone remain--
then the compromise of finding a way around.
It's the butted head, split lip, and purpling bruise,
and knowing the wall will stand and I will lose.