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Unread 01-03-2009, 12:35 PM
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http://www.newcriterion.com/articles...ith-Marli-3999
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Unread 01-03-2009, 03:46 PM
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I like the thought that you live there, I don't doubt it.

And when you came down to earth, you got a good place for your poem.
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Lovely poem, David.
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Good stuff.
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Zen & clear, Dave. Thanks for posting it.

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Unread 01-03-2009, 05:26 PM
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Thanks, friends. Marli really did say this, by the way...
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David - it's beautiful! A thought as fresh and pure as mountain air. This poem is a panorama. Thanks for posting it!

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Nice exchange between the beginning and the approaching question. I love the expressive meter and line breaks. Especially Why?

I too live in the sky but have never said it so well.

Congratulations to "New Criterion" for publishing your poem.
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A lovely thing.
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David,

Beautiful poem. Although your pie was in the sky, you got to eat it. Congrats.

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