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Unread 02-18-2009, 03:57 PM
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Default story, "The Karmic Quarterback"

This story originally appeared in a print journal which has just set up an on-line version. If you want to read something of sports literature, I offer it for your enjoyment:

http://findarticles.com/p/articles/m...g=content;col1

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Nice story, David! I liked the bread and butter--no, make that bread and ghee--straightforwardness of style.
It's the very first piece of 'sports literature' I've ever read. Thanks for the chance--glad I took it!
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Thanks, Juleigh. It was a fun story to write and I'm glad it has put on line for more people to see. Glad you enjoyed it.
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David

I write fiction also. I enjoyed your piece, although I would lie,to see more of the town and the people. Lena is described well. But weather, temp, smells? Google: "Worm Daddy" Lance Levens. I apologize if this sounds like I'm lecturing.
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Not at all, Lance. I'll take a look at your story.

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