Excellent, Siham! Congrats!

I like the polyptoton in the last line: “undoing overdue.”

Really lovely, Siham--graceful and haunting. And a great venue, which I'll explore some more.

Beautiful, Siham! I agree with others--the last line is lovely. And you're in some good company too.

Charlotte

Thanks, Siham. A very nicely turned poem.

Nick

Enjoyed your poem, very lyrical, it's a great ezine, the way it incorporates video and visuals is exciting, most ezines leave me cold but this one looks like a winner.
best wishes
Ross

Martin, Jean, Charlotte, Nick, and Ross,

Thanks so much for your kind words! Martin, I can always count on you to stretch my sketchy vocabulary. Let's hear it for the polyptoton! Jean, this means a lot from you. I'm sure you can have your pick of venues with your fine work! Charlotte, yes, the place is loaded with talent -- I'm lucky to be there! Nick, you made my day. So glad you liked the poem and the placement, Ross.

Best,
Siham

Great, Siham!

What the poem says is important, and how it says it is cool. Congrats, Siham!

Thanks, Susan and Terese!