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A tall order, no leaves...in recognition, I give 'em a hat-tip...
This Autumn, Don't Think of an Elephant I pose this season stripped of expectations whose leafed-through signatories I'll defray from listing as, why prove my deep suspicions that, absent them, it Falls down straightaway? |
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Autumn in San Diego
These tumbleweeds are big as boulders. Sisyphus, I need your shoulders. My arms are scratched from clearing brush. The fire inspector's coming. Rush! It's fall again. The wind is hot. Past years' ash dust tints my snot a baleful shade-- gunpowder black-- to warn me wildfire season's back. |
Julie, I think you have found a helpful vein. Not everyone lives where the leaves change and fall, but the seasonal changes have their own rhythm in those places.
Susan |
Very good Julie. How refreshing to see boulders make a star turn in an autumn poem --and no avalanche! I feel nature itself could do more to combat poetic prefigurement. An embargo of seasonal change would upend all red wheelbarrows. But are the leaves themselves the cliche, or is it the obligatory demise they must endure? I'm thinking maybe the latter.
Here are some title suggestions... Ode to a Recalcitrant Green or maybe A Paler Shade of Green Such a typecast being red Green's the shade of the undead... |
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Not an Ode to Fall
Potato chips with orange food-coloring leave their crumbs inside a page fallen from a tree that fell on copper verdigris. In the dying light of auld lang sein, love yearns for dry rot in its veins leaving in its stead a chance to rest. The paint chips left by sore attention fell through the cracks in the dirt under the linoleum floor. They would have melted into ice if it were summer in the arctic with icicles too dull for threshing. But now they fill the holes in conversations on drooping porches looking toward the drowsing barn. The cows agree with holy orders of concupiscence allowed by hay in the box where they chew the fat. Theirs was a camaraderie so overly picturesque even Constable would have painted it though not an outdoor sport. The swains and wagonners were out looking for love among the trees and puddles and bedraggled sheep. Back in the barn, smiling pumpkins provided every sort of consolation for any absent keys in the natural music. A potential symphony of gobblers, for instance, sat silently beside the shining plates on kitchen tables. There’s nothing like gobble-de-gook to dispel the drone that tempera removes with too much orange. A death’s head on a post, however, will do for orange what an ode on autumn will do for mince. Praise him. |
Seasonal Lament
I prayed the dog-star, Summer’s rage, might waneErik |
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I know the Season by your looks
In Summer sprightly airs, in Fall You never wink at me at all-- Head buried in a bunch of books. |
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Enjoyable, but with a serious overtone. My ex-wife lived in San Diego in the 1980s. She saw the fire in (or near) Normal Heights , maybe it was 1985? It was a terrifying experience for her. |
Julie, your autumn anthem is also suitable for Los Angeles!
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