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James Brancheau 11-24-2022 02:35 PM

It's a beautiful poem, John. I wouldn't have understood the reference, and, for me, I suppose that might just be a bonus. The title works so well too. It's a kind of poem that makes me want to continue to write. Simple, yes, and wonderfully difficult. Like a lot of marriages, haha. I love how a simple verb tense shift from past to present makes all the difference. It's, impactful. Thanks for posting this.

*Let me add that it goes to the roots of why I care about poetry. That some people may not be quite as impressed helps me out.


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