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RCL 01-02-2024 10:50 AM

Alexandra,

Correction noted (memory not so good). I think I'll go with "decorated jacket." On second or third thought, "medaled jacket" preserves the meter, so I'm going with it for now. Thanks for medaled.

Alexandra Baez 01-02-2024 08:27 PM

That's clearer, and the off-rhyme adds some nice variety. Good idea. (You accidentally typed "metaled" in your previous edited comment.)


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