Clive,

Sorry about the ill wind . . .

I, for one, much appreciate your efforts.

Fred

[This message has been edited by Fred Longworth (edited February 25, 2004).]

Dear Fred

Thanks for your supportive comment.

I am at the moment in the middle of writing what will be the first of two concluding pieces. I hope to have this up by the end of the week. This first piece deals with a number of issues; the second will focus entirely on lineation.

Thanks again for your support.

Kind regards

Clive

Geoff,
My request that my poem be withdrawn from consideration for this exercise has nothing to do with Clive or his critique methods, it had to do with the politics of this forum. I have really enjoyed Clive's work here, he put a lot of effort into it and we have all learned a great deal about reading deeper, for it. It is my loss to have withdrawn my poem, but really it is ok, water under the bridge as they say.

Clive,
I do appreciate the free education you've provided all of us through this exercise! Thank you and looking forward to your conclusion.

Warm Regards,
Terri

Dear Fellow Spherians

This note is to apologize for the delay in posting my piece about lineation. I had hoped to do this last week, but I recently took delivery of a new and long-delayed computer. Its arrival led to a number of technical tribulations which I have not yet quite overcome. Nonetheless, I am sufficiently far forward to risk saying that the piece should appear by the end of this week.

Regards to all

Clive Watkins