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Gail White 01-18-2004 03:39 PM

Here's another favorite, by Anonymous:

He prayeth best who loveth best
All creatures great and small.
The Streotococcus is the test -
I love him least of all.

Abid Hussain 04-24-2011 02:16 PM

Very Short Poems
 
Hello to All,

I have always read this epitaph by W.B.Yeats as a very short poem by him about himself. Here it is:

W.B.Yeats (1865-1939)


'Cast a cold Eye
On Life, on Death.
Horseman, pass by!'


And here is the link:

http://www.poetsgraves.co.uk/yeats.htm

Warmest regards/Abid

Will Gourley 04-24-2011 02:37 PM

Even though this is allegedly a short story by Ernest Hemingway, it has the conciseness, cut and slash, and gravitas-in-sketch of a flash poem:

For sale
Baby shoes
Never used

Cheers wkg

John Whitworth 04-24-2011 03:01 PM

Here’s one of those linguistic nits
I’d like you all to share.
It’s not a Helly Copter; it’s
A Helico Pter.

Yeah. I wrote it. It's not great but it is short.

Marcia Karp 04-24-2011 03:43 PM

Separation
Your absence has gone through me
Like thread through a needle.
Everything I do is stitched with its color.

[W. S. Merwin]

R. Nemo Hill 04-24-2011 06:40 PM

Love that one, Marcia!
Thanks.

Nemo

Kimberly Poitevin 04-24-2011 09:19 PM

You fit into me
like a hook into an eye

a fish hook
an open eye

--Margaret Atwood

Orwn Acra 04-24-2011 09:49 PM

Roy Campbell's imagistic

Fishing Boats in Martigues

Around the quays, kicked off in twos
The Four Winds dry their wooden shoes.

Abid Hussain 04-24-2011 11:19 PM

Very Short Poems
 
Hello to All,

If it is allowed and moderators do not mind it, I would like to submit one of my short poems. It was a little longer but I simply failed to improve upon the first two lines and friends told me to let them be during the www.criticalpoet.com days......thanks....warmest regards/Abid

The Touch (23-12-2004)

Saying goodbye,
your hand lingers in mine
like fragrance in the air.



(I was asked to get rid of these last three lines:

Carrying your touch
I try to walk steady
but they spot it and smile.)

Gregory Dowling 04-25-2011 02:35 AM

Hi Abid,

As you invoked the moderator, here I am. Thanks for reviving this thread from seven years ago. It's always interesting to go through the archives and have a fresh look at a topic.

On the subject of posting your own poem, I would just remind you what the description of this forum is:

Musing on Mastery: The tradition of the masters: the classics & how they did it. (Metrical Poetry & Free Verse.)

However, we're not absolutely rigid on this. While discussing some tradition or some aspect of mastery, a point can be effectively made by quoting from one's own poems, and so we let it go. However, it's best if the thread doesn't turn into a parade of self-citations.

Thanks again for the interest in the topic.

Philip Quinlan 04-25-2011 04:17 AM

Sheen

Sun splinters
In water's skin
Quivers hundreds
Of lines to rim
One radiance
You within

Samuel Menashe

Ed Shacklee 04-25-2011 05:29 AM


Television


Hug me, mother of noise,
Find me a hiding place.
I am afraid of my voice.
I do not like my face.

xxx- Anne Stevenson

FOsen 04-26-2011 10:56 AM

A poor thing, but -

After Sū San

Bed with you
was Mount Olympus
but now you’ve gone,
it’s just white plains again.

Frank

Roger Slater 04-26-2011 02:04 PM

Ed Conti has a million of them, but I've always been especially fond of this one, whose title (if it had one) I forget. Ed will forgive me if I've mangled it, but this is the way I remember it:

Life is a journey
that ends on a gurney.

Mary Meriam 04-26-2011 02:14 PM

Amateur Astronomy

The constellations in her vast dark eyes

Induce a host of telescopes to rise.

—Don Thackrey

Bill Carpenter 04-26-2011 04:36 PM

God of Roads

I, peregrine of noon.

--Yvor Winters

Shawn P. Canon 05-19-2011 01:40 AM

And let's not forget Nash's
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by RCL (Post 6252)
And let's not forget Nash's

Candy
is dandy
but liquor
Is quicker.

[This message has been edited by RCL (edited November 28, 2003).]

RCL: BEING IN RECOVERY, I THANK YOU FOR THE REMINDER...........
.........."One Day At A Time". You could add a line or two by saying how or why liquor is quicker.
Mahalos , Shawn.

Shawn P. Canon 05-19-2011 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ed Shacklee (Post 195523)

Television


Hug me, mother of noise,
Find me a hiding place.
I am afraid of my voice.
I do not like my face.

xxx- Anne Stevenson

Hi Ed: When I was a freshman in high school in 1962, my biology teacher called the TV the 'idiot box'. This candid short poem states the TV on other clear notes of varied planes.
MAHALOS, Shawn

Ed Shacklee 05-19-2011 10:10 AM

Stevenson does show 'the soul of wit' in that poem, Shawn. It illuminates so much without giving an easy out or answer. I so admire poets who have that gift.

Ed




I had gone broke, and got set to come back,
And lost, on a hot day and a fast track,
On a long shot at long odds, a black mare
By Hatred out of Envy by Despair.

xxxxx- J. V. Cunningham

Jesse Anger 05-20-2011 11:33 AM

One of my favs.

The Owl

Beneath her nest
a shrew’s head,
a finch’s beak
and the bones
of a quail attest

the owl devours
the hour,
and disregards
the rest.

wendy v.

John Whitworth 05-20-2011 12:43 PM

The clanking and wanking of Her Majesty's prisons.

Gavin Ewart

David Anthony 05-20-2011 03:57 PM

On Fleas

Adam
Had'em

(Anon)

Jean L. Kreiling 05-20-2011 06:19 PM

Great thread!

I see a few others have already offered "Fleas," a favorite of mine, but I don't think this one's been posted yet--a little more substantial, in more ways than one:


"First Fig"

My candle burns at both ends;
It will not last the night;
But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends—
It gives a lovely light.

--Edna St. Vincent Millay

Jean L. Kreiling 05-20-2011 06:20 PM

And of course:

"Second Fig"

Safe upon the solid rock the ugly houses stand:
Come and see my shining palace built upon the sand!

--Edna St. Vincent Millay


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