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Here's another favorite, by Anonymous:
He prayeth best who loveth best All creatures great and small. The Streotococcus is the test - I love him least of all. |
Very Short Poems
Hello to All,
I have always read this epitaph by W.B.Yeats as a very short poem by him about himself. Here it is: W.B.Yeats (1865-1939) 'Cast a cold Eye On Life, on Death. Horseman, pass by!' And here is the link: http://www.poetsgraves.co.uk/yeats.htm Warmest regards/Abid |
Even though this is allegedly a short story by Ernest Hemingway, it has the conciseness, cut and slash, and gravitas-in-sketch of a flash poem:
For sale Baby shoes Never used Cheers wkg |
Here’s one of those linguistic nits
I’d like you all to share. It’s not a Helly Copter; it’s A Helico Pter. Yeah. I wrote it. It's not great but it is short. |
SeparationYour absence has gone through me Like thread through a needle. Everything I do is stitched with its color. [W. S. Merwin] |
Love that one, Marcia!
Thanks. Nemo |
You fit into me
like a hook into an eye a fish hook an open eye --Margaret Atwood |
Roy Campbell's imagistic
Fishing Boats in Martigues Around the quays, kicked off in twos The Four Winds dry their wooden shoes. |
Very Short Poems
Hello to All,
If it is allowed and moderators do not mind it, I would like to submit one of my short poems. It was a little longer but I simply failed to improve upon the first two lines and friends told me to let them be during the www.criticalpoet.com days......thanks....warmest regards/Abid The Touch (23-12-2004) Saying goodbye, your hand lingers in mine like fragrance in the air. (I was asked to get rid of these last three lines: Carrying your touch I try to walk steady but they spot it and smile.) |
Hi Abid,
As you invoked the moderator, here I am. Thanks for reviving this thread from seven years ago. It's always interesting to go through the archives and have a fresh look at a topic. On the subject of posting your own poem, I would just remind you what the description of this forum is: Musing on Mastery: The tradition of the masters: the classics & how they did it. (Metrical Poetry & Free Verse.) However, we're not absolutely rigid on this. While discussing some tradition or some aspect of mastery, a point can be effectively made by quoting from one's own poems, and so we let it go. However, it's best if the thread doesn't turn into a parade of self-citations. Thanks again for the interest in the topic. |
Sheen
Sun splinters In water's skin Quivers hundreds Of lines to rim One radiance You within Samuel Menashe |
Television Hug me, mother of noise, Find me a hiding place. I am afraid of my voice. I do not like my face. xxx- Anne Stevenson |
A poor thing, but -
After Sū San Bed with you was Mount Olympus but now you’ve gone, it’s just white plains again. Frank |
Ed Conti has a million of them, but I've always been especially fond of this one, whose title (if it had one) I forget. Ed will forgive me if I've mangled it, but this is the way I remember it:
Life is a journey that ends on a gurney. |
Amateur Astronomy
The constellations in her vast dark eyes Induce a host of telescopes to rise. —Don Thackrey |
God of Roads
I, peregrine of noon. --Yvor Winters |
And let's not forget Nash's
Quote:
.........."One Day At A Time". You could add a line or two by saying how or why liquor is quicker. Mahalos , Shawn. |
Quote:
MAHALOS, Shawn |
Stevenson does show 'the soul of wit' in that poem, Shawn. It illuminates so much without giving an easy out or answer. I so admire poets who have that gift.
Ed I had gone broke, and got set to come back, And lost, on a hot day and a fast track, On a long shot at long odds, a black mare By Hatred out of Envy by Despair. xxxxx- J. V. Cunningham |
One of my favs.
The Owl Beneath her nest a shrew’s head, a finch’s beak and the bones of a quail attest the owl devours the hour, and disregards the rest. wendy v. |
The clanking and wanking of Her Majesty's prisons.
Gavin Ewart |
On Fleas
Adam Had'em (Anon) |
Great thread!
I see a few others have already offered "Fleas," a favorite of mine, but I don't think this one's been posted yet--a little more substantial, in more ways than one: "First Fig" My candle burns at both ends; It will not last the night; But ah, my foes, and oh, my friends— It gives a lovely light. --Edna St. Vincent Millay |
And of course:
"Second Fig" Safe upon the solid rock the ugly houses stand: Come and see my shining palace built upon the sand! --Edna St. Vincent Millay |
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