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Rob Stuart 06-03-2013 07:52 AM

Ah, I see what you mean now, Nigel. A rogue letter crept in to screw up the end of the acrostic, which should (and now does!) read 'LARF'.

Rob Stuart 06-03-2013 07:53 AM

[quote=Peter Goulding;287415]Not me Rob. Tricky enough as it is. I expect someone will end up doing it in Latin with every line a palindrome.

Says the man who's just produced a bloody villanelle!

Brian Allgar 06-03-2013 08:10 AM

Well, Rob, you've done the acrostic - but my implicit challenge to Bazza (or anyone else) was to make it rhyme. Ha-ha, chiz, enuff said!

P.S. The last word was originally LARK - I don't know why you've changed it to LARF.

Graham King 06-04-2013 09:21 AM

Threat-filled gusts carouse this night.
Through trees the moon casts fingers:
Shadows long, clutching and bent;
Their grip on one’s heart lingers.

Solemn statues line the drive,
Each stony visage haunting;
Golem-life they seem to have
(Endowed, somehow): dumb, daunting.

Gravel grinds beneath my shoes,
Shifts, scrunching, under tip-toes;
Silent though I strive to stride,
Each crunch (so loud!) yet echoes.

Starting up steps to the door (the key -
Yes - in my pocket!)
To enter – late - unheard, I creep-
Pray wife’s asleep! – then lock it.

[I caught just in time, before sending in the entry, my error - carelessly having S3L2 begin 'Moves', which has become 'Shifts' to suit S3L1's end].
I also, late on, rewrote L1 from 'Wild and windy was the night' to something less hackneyed.]

Rob Stuart 06-04-2013 02:36 PM

P.S. The last word was originally LARK - I don't know why you've changed it to LARF.[/quote]

Simply to make it circular, Brian-it starts and ends with the letter 'f'. For what it's worth. Which is nothing, I know.

Graham King 06-04-2013 08:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Rob Stuart (Post 287561)
Simply to make it circular, Brian-it starts and ends with the letter 'f'. For what it's worth. Which is nothing, I know.

Rob, I commend you for it! And I too, independently, have felt a strange drive to make my entries circular. But I wonder why?
(Do I have a similar urge, on finding odd pieces of string, to tie their ends together? I don't think so.
I do though always plug together the ends of extension leads after coiling them up to put away...) ;):D

Brian Allgar 06-05-2013 02:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Rob Stuart (Post 287561)
Simply to make it circular, Brian-it starts and ends with the letter 'f'. For what it's worth. Which is nothing, I know.

Ah, I understand now. I hadn't spotted that. Circularity, eh? Perhaps you've been reading too much Eliot - "In my beginning is my end", and so forth.

Brian Allgar 06-05-2013 02:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Graham King (Post 287577)
I do though always plug together the ends of extension leads after coiling them up to put away...) ;):D

That reminds me of James Thurber's grandmother, who always ensured that there were plugs in all the sockets for fear of electricity leaking out during the night.

John Whitworth 06-05-2013 08:28 AM

Daisychain

Daisychain, daisychain,
Nursling of Spring,
Garland of garden grass,
Shrubbery string.

Gift to your sweetheart or
Ring from your lover,
Recreant daisychain,
Nexus of never.

Rite of the sunshine and
Dew on the meadow,
Wandering wildering
Garland of sorrow,

Westering daisychain,
Necklace of Maying,
Ghost of the garden grass
Sings without saying.

Rob Stuart 06-05-2013 10:26 AM

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Originally Posted by John Whitworth (Post 287592)
Daisychain

Daisychain, daisychain,
Nursling of Spring,
Garland of garden grass,
Shrubbery string.

Gift to your sweetheart or
Ring from your lover,
Recreant daisychain,
Nexus of never.

Rite of the sunshine and
Dew on the meadow,
Wandering wildering
Garland of sorrow,

Westering daisychain,
Necklace of Maying,
Ghost of the garden grass
Sings without saying.

Very nice, John. I do like it when content complements form so explicitly.


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