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Ann Drysdale 09-29-2011 06:31 AM

Aaaah! I feel a great surge of affection for a man who rhymes "Purcell" with "Rehearsal". Dryden, thou shoulds't be living at this hour! Please do not mistake this for sarcasm - I really mean it!

Martin Elster 09-29-2011 05:38 PM

Thanks, Ann. I appreciate that, and I didn't take it as sarcasm in the least. Conveniently, Purcell can be pronounced both ways.

Susan McLean 09-29-2011 09:12 PM

Martin, all those anapests in your last line made it less satisfying to me. It occurred to me that something like "It would have helped, though, to have brought his bass" might add more punch to the line.

Susan

Martin Elster 09-29-2011 10:13 PM

Susan, thanks for your thoughts on the last line. I was afraid those anapests might have bogged it down a bit, so I've amended it with your suggestion.


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