I wouldn't touch that Larkin, Bob, it's perfect as is.

Frank

I could, Brian, but I'm not sure I'm inclined to. The clunkier the better, I reckon. Lucy might reckon quite differently, of course...

Do the rhymes, Rob, and then offer her both versions. I feel there must be something more than clunkiness. But I could be wrong and the divine Lucy is inscrutable.

Brian, I have taken your advice. Do you think it improved?

John,
Isn't it Yin-Yang, rather then Ying-Yang? Or, am I missing something here in British usage?

No you are not. It's pure ignorance. Sorry.

Pin-pong? Wif-Waff?

Yes.xxxxxxxxxxx

I'm finding this comp curiously addictive.

That most aesthetically pleasing of plants with large, woody stems, Prunus avium, currently
Has its branches bedecked with a considerable number of reproductive structures...

by A.E. Domicilemasculineperson

Surely those initials are a bit too abbreviated?

Any suggestions?