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Gail White 01-18-2004 03:39 PM

Here's another favorite, by Anonymous:

He prayeth best who loveth best
All creatures great and small.
The Streotococcus is the test -
I love him least of all.

Abid Hussain 04-24-2011 02:16 PM

Very Short Poems
 
Hello to All,

I have always read this epitaph by W.B.Yeats as a very short poem by him about himself. Here it is:

W.B.Yeats (1865-1939)


'Cast a cold Eye
On Life, on Death.
Horseman, pass by!'


And here is the link:

http://www.poetsgraves.co.uk/yeats.htm

Warmest regards/Abid

Will Gourley 04-24-2011 02:37 PM

Even though this is allegedly a short story by Ernest Hemingway, it has the conciseness, cut and slash, and gravitas-in-sketch of a flash poem:

For sale
Baby shoes
Never used

Cheers wkg

John Whitworth 04-24-2011 03:01 PM

Here’s one of those linguistic nits
I’d like you all to share.
It’s not a Helly Copter; it’s
A Helico Pter.

Yeah. I wrote it. It's not great but it is short.

Marcia Karp 04-24-2011 03:43 PM

Separation
Your absence has gone through me
Like thread through a needle.
Everything I do is stitched with its color.

[W. S. Merwin]

R. Nemo Hill 04-24-2011 06:40 PM

Love that one, Marcia!
Thanks.

Nemo

Kimberly Poitevin 04-24-2011 09:19 PM

You fit into me
like a hook into an eye

a fish hook
an open eye

--Margaret Atwood

Orwn Acra 04-24-2011 09:49 PM

Roy Campbell's imagistic

Fishing Boats in Martigues

Around the quays, kicked off in twos
The Four Winds dry their wooden shoes.

Abid Hussain 04-24-2011 11:19 PM

Very Short Poems
 
Hello to All,

If it is allowed and moderators do not mind it, I would like to submit one of my short poems. It was a little longer but I simply failed to improve upon the first two lines and friends told me to let them be during the www.criticalpoet.com days......thanks....warmest regards/Abid

The Touch (23-12-2004)

Saying goodbye,
your hand lingers in mine
like fragrance in the air.



(I was asked to get rid of these last three lines:

Carrying your touch
I try to walk steady
but they spot it and smile.)

Gregory Dowling 04-25-2011 02:35 AM

Hi Abid,

As you invoked the moderator, here I am. Thanks for reviving this thread from seven years ago. It's always interesting to go through the archives and have a fresh look at a topic.

On the subject of posting your own poem, I would just remind you what the description of this forum is:

Musing on Mastery: The tradition of the masters: the classics & how they did it. (Metrical Poetry & Free Verse.)

However, we're not absolutely rigid on this. While discussing some tradition or some aspect of mastery, a point can be effectively made by quoting from one's own poems, and so we let it go. However, it's best if the thread doesn't turn into a parade of self-citations.

Thanks again for the interest in the topic.


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