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Ed Shacklee 07-09-2011 03:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Roger Slater (Post 204474)
OK, write a hundred lines (rhyming and metrical), no more, no less, on mixed nuts in America. Post it here by Monday morning, 9 a.m. eastern time. No acrostics.

I'll provide one of the readers, at least, if there are any takers.

I have a feeling the proposed length will deter many would-be entrants, though. Besides the investment of time and -- er -- poetic energy it would require, 100 lines about anything is about 84 more than most mere mortals can manage. Even the long distance writers among us may not start out with a set number of lines in mind. Or perhaps they do. Do they?

Ed

Shaun J. Russell 07-09-2011 08:44 AM

Ah, but the length is a mere hurdle, Ed! Though I agree that your poems are perfect in their succinctness.

I'm pretty sure I can pump something out within the parameters, or would at least be game to try (it's the spirit of the thing). I won't do it without an avowed competitor however.

Roger Slater 07-09-2011 11:15 AM

I thought you might go first and then the rest of us could respond.

Mary Meriam 07-09-2011 11:24 AM

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Originally Posted by Ed Shacklee (Post 204530)
Even the long distance writers among us may not start out with a set number of lines in mind. Or perhaps they do. Do they?

I do. I design the form before I start, so that I'll have a sense of the size of the canvas. Otherwise, I wouldn't know how to handle details in each part of the whole. It's a mostly intuitive production, which would be much harder without knowing the length in advance.

PS: I can see myself writing 100 lines on mixed nuts. Yes, I think so.

Ed Shacklee 07-09-2011 11:41 AM

That's fascinating, Mary. I'd never thought of it that way, but it makes a lot of sense.

Ed

Edmund Conti 07-09-2011 12:01 PM

100 lines is not enough for all the Republican candidates for the presidency.

Gail White 07-09-2011 12:11 PM

Today's intelligence test:
Would you rather
A) Read Poetry Daily and Verse Daily on-line
B) Write about flying pigs or mixed nuts on Eratosphere
C) Google pictures of interspecies snorgling on youtube?

W.F. Lantry 07-09-2011 12:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Gail White (Post 204570)

Would you rather

C) Google pictures of interspecies snorgling on youtube?

Dear Gail,

Having just done this, for the first time in my life, I would find *any* other option preferable. Frankly, I think I'd rather stick my arm into a fire ant nest. All the way to the elbow! ;)

In fact, I think I'd rather be this guy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YIMigVo1pyA

Yikes!

Thanks,

Bill

Shaun J. Russell 07-09-2011 12:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Mary Meriam (Post 204564)
I do. I design the form before I start, so that I'll have a sense of the size of the canvas. Otherwise, I wouldn't know how to handle details in each part of the whole. It's a mostly intuitive production, which would be much harder without knowing the length in advance.

I agree, and I typically do the same thing. I'm primarily a sonnet writer, so that makes it a bit easier, but when I've written other forms (Swiftian satire, Rhyme Royal, Villanelle, Ghazal etc.) I've had a firm idea of the length in mind before I started.

In fact, in my early days of writing sonnets, I used to jot down "A, B, B, A, A, B, B, A, C, D, C, D, C, D" at the start of each line before I even began. It would help me better visualize the track the poem would need to take. It was sort of akin to knowing how many letters a particular answer was in a crossword puzzle.


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PS: I can see myself writing 100 lines on mixed nuts. Yes, I think so.
Is that the gauntlet? Do we need a starter pistol to fire to declare it's on?

Mary Meriam 07-09-2011 01:06 PM

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Originally Posted by E. Shaun Russell (Post 204572)
Is that the gauntlet? Do we need a starter pistol to fire to declare it's on?


I'm already on line 17.


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