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Andrew Szilvasy 08-17-2018 08:37 AM

Mike Juster on 'Rattle' today
 
For his poem "Heirloom."

I find the poem impressive in being able to find a simple yet convincing objective correlative and, also, in the way Mike is able to use tet couplets for something other than humor.

Aaron Poochigian 08-17-2018 12:20 PM

I like how sexy it is.

Erik Olson 08-17-2018 12:50 PM

Hey, this is attractive and great. Congratulations!

P.S. Oh, after Andrew’s remark, not that I was ever under any doubt that tet couplets could avail something more than humor, but it is true indeed that HEIRLOOM shines as an impressive specimen.

Vera Ignatowitsch 08-17-2018 05:13 PM

What a wonderful metaphor.

Gail White 08-18-2018 07:12 PM

Way to go, Mike!

Terese Coe 08-19-2018 09:12 PM

Satirical and mysterious at once. Congrats, Michael!

Michael Juster 08-21-2018 05:18 PM

Thanks, everyone! I am very grateful for your comments.

Nausheen Eusuf 08-24-2018 05:15 PM

Just saw this today -- lovely poem, and congrats, Mike!

Nausheen

Jim Moonan 08-24-2018 06:58 PM

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One beautiful tomatopoem.
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