Gwen Harwood was a formal poet with a great gift for character.
Gwen Harwood This poem is about one character whom she follows in various poems. A pianist, a trapped genius of the second rank. The Flight of the Bumble Bee Kröte plays for a fiddler scraping flthat bee thing from his violin. There's little prospect of escaping flback to Green Room and his gin. A piece concerned with flight--symbolic! flhe murmurs pianissimo. Somebody hisses "Alcoholic" flaudibly from the nearest row. That woman with the bust! That bumbling flamateur with an insect heart! Heaven preserve me from all fumbling flspear-holders on the stage of Art. Drunk, often. Alcolholic never! flHere comes those octaves-and-a-third. Madam I could play on for ever, flthinks Kröte, playing his absurd pantomime of a great musician flwresting hard with his instrument. The fiddler's nervous disposition flrapidly throws him off the scent of any flower the bee might visit-- flhe scrapes beyond the normal ear. Has Kröte drowned him out? Or is it fla sound that only bats can hear? The woman with the bust claps brightly, flnot sure that anything's amiss. The fiddler bows, deciding rightly flagainst an encore. Kröte's bliss flowers in the Green Room, where restored to flhis bottle, in the grateful pause before the storm, he can afford to flignore the honey of applause. |
Great choice, Janet. I met Gwen at Monash in the late eighties. This one is the second half of a pair. The first half is entitled "Barn Owl", and deserves to be posted, but I couldn't find either on the web so I just typed out part II.
BTW, I made the mistake of giving this poem to my daughter to read while browsing through Borders when I didn't have any tissues in my pocket. II Nightfall Forty years, lived or dreamed: what memories pack them home. Now the season that seemed incredible is come. Father and child, we stand in time's long-promised land. Since there's no more to taste ripeness is plainly all. Father, we pick our last fruits of the temporal. Eighty years old, you take this late walk for my sake. Who can be what you were? Link your dry hand in mine, my stick-thin comforter. Far distant suburbs shine with great simplicities. Birds crowd in flowering trees, sunset exalts its known symbols of transience. Your passionate face is grown to ancient innocence. Let us walk this hour as if death had no power. or were no more than sleep. Things truly named can never vanish from earth. You keep a child's delight for ever in birds, flowers, shivery-grass - I name them as we pass. "Be your tears wet?" You speak as if air touched a string near-breaking point. Your cheek brushes on mine. Old king your marvellous journey's done. Your night and day are one as you find with your white stick the path on which you turn home with the child once quick to mischief, grown to learn what sorrows, in the end, no words, no tears can mend. [This message has been edited by Mark Allinson (edited January 15, 2005).] |
Mark, but what a mark you left on your daughter ;)
Here's a lovely one: A Piece of Ivory I would grieve over fallen finches, drowned frogs, an occasional duckling that did not live to be eaten, but this was beyond me. .but this was beyond me.At bedtime my father said "You remember the circus you saw at Enoggera? Well, one of the elephants went mad and killed a keeper who used to torment it." "And serve him right," my grandmother said. My father continued "It had to be shot. They made the other elephants dig it a grave in the paddock, and help to bury it." I saw them in wrinkled twilight swaying with spades in their trunks, chained one to the other, crying and digging a grave for their friend. Next morning, unroofing the graves of Finch, Frog, Duck, I ran howling at what gave shine to the world then took it away forever. I remember my grandmother's comfort, my being allowed to play with her particular treasure: an enamelled Indian casket full of handcarved ivory elephants, diminishing, the smallest the size of a grain of wheat. But carved. The artist cared. [This message has been edited by Janet Kenny (edited January 15, 2005).] |
Night and Dreams
“I come to you inI “I come to you in a dream of ages past,” sings Crab. He swirls his velvet- seaweed cloak. “When first we met, and last, you will recall, I was imprisoned in your father’s house.” Sea colours on his carapace, wave-hiss, tide rustle in his voice. “Some fiend has tied my fearful claws--” --Yes, I recall. I must have been a skinny child of eight or nine that night my father brought you home-- “No, let me tell,” says Crab, “this is my aria, my party piece. Grandmother, mother, father, brother and you, went to the local theatre leaving me bound in parching darkness. I prayed: Redeemer Crab, release me by your own sidelong righteousness from these straightforward evildoers. Take me where my transparent children float in their manifold sea vision. Silence. Mouse-whisper, cockroach-scuffle. I felt, not far, the Brisbane River ebbing to salt creek, mangrove swamp, and burst my bonds, O yes I did! and raged through your dark house, and hid. That night you dared not go to bed finding me gone when you returned. Splintered pencils and toys proclaimed my ocean strength. How soon forgotten what Stan and Olly did and said! Time, time. I felt the tide returning far off. O Salt Redeemer, come (I prayed) let navies drown to feed me with rotten stump, decaying belly, or if I am to die, allow me one crunchbone tender-balancing foot.” --My father caught you. “Ah, he did. ‘Bring me the hatpin.’ Someone put a diamond eye on a steel stalk into your father’s hand to stab my stalked eyes. O the blaze of pain eclipsing light’s immense mandala! Seagreen, seablue, I raged to red. Boiling crab died. I became Crab.” “I come to you inII Crab is dressed for the feast: on lettuce shredded to seaweed ribbons, cracked claws reassembled, he lies among parsley curls and radish roses. Our starchy Sunday-snowy cloth is set with what remains of Greatgrandmother’s china, translucent white, rimmed with a deepsea blue. On his great serving dish Crab’s at the centre of a splendid colour wheel: cucumber slices, tomato, celery, carrot, egg: my work, duly admired. My grandmother says grace. “Where would you eat like this," my father asks, passing the homemade bread, “except in Queensland?” A lovely room. Windows give on the garden, rose and green panes of bubble-glass enchanting the dullest day. The sideboard mirror offers more light. Such light, restoring, recomposing many who dined here. Most of them are dead. “I come to you inIII “That’s enough of pentameters,” says Crab, returning to my dream. --What shall I write, I ask. He writes, so I won’t miss his fearful joke: THE DIRE BELLY VARIATIONS! Making himself a cairn of stones he says, “This is my own rock group. O I’m the original punk rocker with a hatpin through my brain, my brain, with a diamond hatpin through my brain.” --Your jokes are awful. “I know worse.” --Impossible. “Shall I rehearse the names of those who’ve died from cancer? O I’m the original merry prankster, a diamond hatpin’s all my eye. Tell me, where are those who ate my claws, my tender body meat? Laurel and Hardy fans, long gone! You cracked my hardware, ate my software. Now I’m programmed in your brain.” “I come to you inIV More and mmore of the great questions, such as: what am I doing here in gumboots and a summer nightdress in a moonlit garden chasing sheep? The sheep are out. It’s not a dream. I’ll mend the broken fence tomorrow. What’s left of night? Enough to dream in. What dreams will come? Who else but Crab. I ate him sixty years ago. Ocean of memory, transposing feaster and feast. He beckons, wearing seaweed clothes, with sidelong charm. “Shall we go to a pirate movie?” --You like the sea? “I like the bodies, and ‘Take the lady below and make her comfortable’, that’s what I like. I can’t be bothered with the love scenes. I’ve opened hearts. I know what’s in them.” At interval he buys refreshments, “Two seafood sticks. One without crab. Come live with me and be my supper where colours have no boundaries, where every word is writ in water, I’ll put my arm around your waist. I’ll put my armour round your waist. Shell after shell my soft self waxes. Seek help! Sea kelp for drowning sailors. Great questions all have wavering answers.” Ghosts crowd to hear, O my lost loves. Waking to hard-edge sunlit colours, sharp birdsong, lamb-bleat, I recall myself among the moonlit sheep questioning--what? Why should I care how long ago my death began? Am I a ghost dreaming I’m human with herbs to plant, a fence to mend? [This message has been edited by Janet Kenny (edited January 15, 2005).] |
I'd like to thank Janet for initiating this thread. I think we've moved up a long way from Murray! Mark, the poem is Father and Child, my favorite Harwood poem (well, it's trimeter, and damn fine trimeter at that.) Here is the first section:
The Barn Owl Daybreak: the household slept. I rose, blessed by the sun. A horny fiend, I crept out with my father's gun. Let him dream of a child obedient, angel-mild-- old No-Sayer, robbed of power by sleep. I knew my prize who swooped home at this hour with daylight-riddled eyes to his place on a high beam in our old stables, to dream light's useless time away. I stood, holding my breath, in urine-scented hay, master of life and death, a wisp-haired judge whose law would punish beak and claw. My first shot struck. He swayed, ruined, beating his only wing, as I watched, afraid by the fallen gun, a lonely child who believed death clean and final, not this obscene bundle of stuff that dropped, and dribbled through loose straw tangling in bowels, and hopped blindly closer. I saw those eyes that did not see mirror my cruelty while the wrecked thing that could not bear the light nor hide hobbled in its own blood. My father reached my side, gave me the fallen gun. "End what you have begun." I fired. The blank eyes shone once into mine and slept. I leaned my head upon my father's arm and wept, owl-blind in early sun for what I had begun. When I first crawled out from under my rock to realize there was more than Wilbur, Tim Steele sent me some very hard-to-find books. Helen Trimpi, Suzanne Doyle, Dick Davis, and Gwen Harwood's Collected from Oxford, which is probably still in print. All wonderful, masterful poets. |
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