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Susan McLean

12-31-2021 08:11 AM

The New Verse News

One of Martin Elster's recent poems, workshopped here, was up yesterday at The New Verse News:
http://www.newversenews.com/

Congratulations, Martin!

Susan

Martin Elster

12-31-2021 10:52 AM

Thanks, Susan! Here's the direct link:

https://newversenews.blogspot.com/20...nderworld.html

Many thanks, Julie and Rick, for your comments and suggestions while the poem was being workshopped at Met.

Julie Steiner

01-02-2022 09:44 AM

I like the "cousin" tweak near the end, which wasn't in the version I saw. Congrats, Martin!

Martin Elster

01-02-2022 09:53 AM

Thanks, Julie. Your feedback and suggestions while this was being workshopped were quite helpful. I'm glad you like "cousin." I think that one word changes the character of the whole poem. We are all cousins on this pale blue dot.

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