LitRev 'Down and out' by 24th Jan 2012
 

Here's the next competition for the Literary Review:

From the magazine:
The next subject is 'down and out'; poems, which must rhyme and scan as usual, should arrive by 24th January.

The email address for overseas entries is: editorial@literaryreview.co.uk
and the postal address for UK entries (that's how they prefer it!) is 44 Lexington Street, London W1F 0LW

(24 lines max.)
Jayne

Well, I have this, have had it for some time.


Down and Out

The organist was pissed.
His music was sadly missed.
When he fell off his chair
With his legs in the air
They thought he was round the twist.

The congregation hissed
Could he be a somnambulist?
But he started to snore
Face down on the floor,
And they rapidly got the gist.

No prohibitionist,
That instrumentalist,
Was stoned and sunk.
He was drunk as a skunk.
He was totally Brahms and Lizst.

I love that, John.
(I rarely have a 'Here's one I made earlier' poem; it's great when that happens!)

What's more, it's true. I got the story from a newspaper. It was a wedding and he was suspended. Not sacked because organists are hard to find.

Me again!


Down and Out

My Dad was born dirt poor and he was poor when he was dead.
He lived in cardboard city in a corrugated shed.
You say your life is tough but, hell, our lives were so much tougher.
You draw your weekly benefit. We had to sit and suffer.

We hadn't got the wit to steal nor yet the brass to beg,
But Dad would dance the Highland Fling and shake his wooden leg.
You haven't got a bean but, cripes, we hadn't got a prayer.
It's not enough to bugger off, you have to be a stayer.

A rainy day it was when Dad was put into the ground.
He left his empty sea chest and just thirty-seven pound.
You say you're penniless but, Jeeze, we were much pennilesser.
We lived on crusts and fag-ends that we found behind the dresser.

Dad sold Mum to the slavers in a dive in Buenos Aires.
That was unkind. He lost his mind. It vanished with the fairies.
Mum danced on bar-room tables in her knickers and a hat.
You may think the world's your oyster but it's fishier than that.

Yes, he sold her to the slavers for his thirty seven quid.
A man does what he has to do and that was what he did.
It's the poor that play their hearts out but the rich that run the game.
If things had turned out different then they wouldn't be the same.

It's the rich that get the pleasure and the poor that get the curse.
The truth is sad. The truth is bad. The truth is worse and worse.
You say you're down and out but, shitehawks, we were down and outer.
Dad sold Mum to the slavers so we had to do without her.

hilarious, john
 

Haven't laughed so much since the pigs ate my brother. Merry Crimbo.

Why thank you, Bazza. Praise from a master.