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Witty double sonnet on a great theme!

http://newversenews.blogspot.com/201...hese-days.html

Entertaining, Michael. I remember the first part of it. The last line feels a bit awkward metrically, but I like the content of the whole as satire.

Susan

Droll. Kudos!

Enjoyed this, Michael.

Congratulations, Michael! I bet your line of sleeveless T-shirts, previously advertised at Frostwriting, is going to sell like hotcakes (or beefcakes?) with this kind of product placement.

Wow, razor sharp wit! Congrats, Michael!

Nausheen

Yea, Michael! Nice photo of you, too . . .

Very good, Michael. I enjoyed that droll double sonnet. Congrats!

I workshopped an earlier version of this some months back. Thanks, all, for the help.

I remember this, Michael, and I really like the way it's turned out. Congrats!

Charlotte