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Susan d.S. 11-11-2014 03:07 PM

Poetica Victorian
 
Ed Shacklee's "The Playing Fields of Eton," set to music and pictures,
here.

Richard Meyer 11-11-2014 09:51 PM

Nice job, Ed. I enjoyed the poem and the video. And Beethoven’s Für Elise is an interesting musical accompaniment.

Richard

Ed Shacklee 11-12-2014 05:50 AM

Thanks, Richard and Susan; and the folks at Poetica Victorian. Apparently this has been up for almost a year and I didn't know about it.

I would never have thought of playing Für Elise in the background, but it's ghoulishly appropriate in its way. As is the fade to gray at a certain point. Ghoulishy appropriate: that's me all over.

Best,

Ed

Martin Rocek 11-14-2014 10:47 PM

Congratulations!

Terese Coe 11-15-2014 10:26 AM

Just caught up with this vid, and Ed, that is a deeply affecting antiwar poem. Huge congratulations!

Marcia Karp 11-15-2014 03:44 PM

Quite the final line, Ed.

R. Nemo Hill 11-15-2014 04:13 PM

Excellent, Ed.
And that is one of the few visual/video/musical approaches to setting a poem that I have ever thought worked at all. It amplifies, rather than reduces! Bravo on all counts.

Nemo

Janice D. Soderling 11-16-2014 01:51 AM

Excellent poem, Ed, and very well presented. I am bowled over by the preciseness, the lucidity, your way with words.

Susan McLean 11-16-2014 09:14 AM

Ed, that was terrific. The anger and sadness come through all the more cuttingly by means of the restraint and beauty of the form.

Susan

Michael Cantor 11-16-2014 09:54 AM

Very nice, Ed. And the audios and visuals help, rather than get in the way, which is normally not the case. Unique poem and presentation.


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