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Susan McLean

05-15-2017 08:30 AM

The New Verse News

I have a new villanelle in The New Verse News:

https://newversenews.blogspot.com/20...illanelle.html

Susan

Chris O'Carroll

05-15-2017 08:43 AM

Good poem, Susan. And the title is a winner. I didn't quite notice at first, then had one of those slightly startling, entirely delightful moments of getting it.

Maryann Corbett

05-15-2017 10:24 AM

A zinger, Susan.

Roger Slater

05-15-2017 10:44 AM

Really good!

Ed Shacklee

05-15-2017 01:38 PM

Vanilla twist! That is butter-wouldn't-melt-in-my-mouth wicked and sly. Trust Susan to deliver the goods with a villanelle.

Best,

Ed

Richard Meyer

05-15-2017 01:40 PM

Very nice, indeed, Susan. Well-crafted use of the form.

Richard

Melissa Balmain

05-16-2017 10:22 PM

A double scoop of wow, poem and title!

Terese Coe

05-17-2017 09:07 AM

Sneaks up on you, just like vanilla~~congrats, Susan!

Catherine Chandler

05-17-2017 03:07 PM

A really good one, Susan! Love the title!

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