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Andrew Szilvasy 12-12-2018 06:37 AM

Loch Raven Review
 
Hi all,

I have a quartet of poems up at "Loch Raven Review." Two ("Mysteries" and "The Pianist Plays Parcheesi") were workshopped here about two years ago and benefitted greatly from your expertise. Two others ("Beyond All Change" and "Tourist in Amsterdam") are among the first poems I wrote when I began writing poetry again that I was proud of then and continue to like now.

As always, thanks for your keen insights!

Erik Olson 12-12-2018 11:05 AM

What a nice home for the wonderful batch of poems. Congratulations!
So too for the life lesson, relevant today, at The Asses of Parnassus!

Andrew Szilvasy 12-12-2018 12:01 PM

Erik,

Thanks for the praise--and thanks for pointing out the Asses poem!

Aaron Novick 12-12-2018 07:36 PM

Congrats, Andrew!

John Riley 12-12-2018 08:22 PM

Congratulations, Andrew

Andrew Szilvasy 12-12-2018 08:28 PM

Aaron and John,

Thanks for the kudos!

Julie Steiner 12-13-2018 11:15 PM

Congrats, Andrew! I particularly liked the first poem.

Martin Elster 12-13-2018 11:45 PM

Congratulations, Andrew! My favorite was poem No. 1 with its sound argument and great imagery.

Andrew Szilvasy 12-14-2018 08:30 AM

Julie and Martin,

I'm glad you liked "Beyond All Change" in particular.


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