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Andrew Szilvasy 01-04-2020 07:29 AM

Poem at "Barren Magazine"
 
My poem "Owl Stretching Time," workshopped here last year, I believe, is up at Barren Magazine.

Thanks for all your help.

EDIT: A link, of course, would be helpful. Sorry.

Andrew Mandelbaum 01-04-2020 03:11 PM

Congrats, Andrew.
Nice job.

Aaron Novick 01-04-2020 03:13 PM

Congrats, Andrew!

Martin Elster 01-04-2020 06:08 PM

Congrats, Andrew! I enjoyed the poem with its great use of anaphora and rather frightening characterization.

It reminds me of a strange guy who was my roommate once. He bought a BB gun, and one day I came home to find holes in my metal cabinet. I moved out soon after.

Andrew Szilvasy 01-12-2020 09:06 AM

Thanks all!


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