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Matt Q 10-02-2021 04:56 PM

small stuff
 
I have a haiku in each of the current issues of Modern Haiku, Frogpond, and First Frost, but since they're all print journals I can't link to anything, so you'll just have to take my word for it :)

Joe Crocker 10-02-2021 05:48 PM

I believe you Matt. That sounds like a hugely impressive result. No chance of putting them up here? Or would that be bad form?

David Callin 10-03-2021 07:03 AM

Yay, well done Matt Quinn.
A publishable haiku
is a very rare ...

oh bugger. Well done anyway.

David

Sarah-Jane Crowson 10-03-2021 01:25 PM

Yay! Good to hear that they're out there.

If one of those is the lilacs one, it's gorgeous.

(David, I'm not sure if you've ever sent out haiku, but if you haven't, know that from my experience at least, haiku journal authors are both extremely nice and very, very quick in commenting on work sent. I've not met one that hasn't gone out of their way to be helpful, even to speculative submissions).

Sarah-Jane

W T Clark 10-03-2021 02:20 PM

Can you post the haiku?

Matt Q 10-03-2021 04:21 PM

Joe, David, Sarah and Cameon,

Thanks people! I guess there's no reason not to post them here. And if there is, I'm sure someone will tell me.

-Matt


making excuses
to your downturned face
november rain

(first frost)


the day after
the scent of lilac
limping

(Modern Haiku)


dropping coins
on his sleeping bag
winter rain

(Frogpond)

W T Clark 10-03-2021 04:30 PM

This is electricity.
It's also good to show others who may not have realised it that the idea of a haiku as a 5-7-5 structure, is a fallacy.

Julie Steiner 10-03-2021 11:44 PM

Well done, Matt. I especially like the third.

Jim Moonan 10-06-2021 04:02 PM

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Good haiku taken in at just the right moment feels almost illegal it's so good. It falls through the cracks and lands on its feet. Like these do.
.

RCL 10-08-2021 12:50 PM

Small but really good stuff!


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