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Siham Karami 10-28-2021 04:13 PM

New Poem/ publication Breaks the Ice
 
Since I rarely visit these days, it feels a little unfair to post this but I’m happy about it and it WAS workshopped here a few years ago - and finally came to fruition. My poem “The Birth of Venus” on a new site called Lit.Hub at the News Station. Thanks, y’all for indulging me my little triumphs. :D

W T Clark 10-29-2021 05:11 AM

Con
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It's a fantastically inventive poem. I wcsh I had been there to critique it.

Matt Q 10-29-2021 07:06 AM

This is wonderful, Siham. I love it. I'm very glad you decided to post it.

John Riley 10-29-2021 09:34 AM

Love the cars rivering. Congratulations.!

Siham Karami 10-29-2021 10:44 AM

Thanks so much for the encouragement!! It’s indeed quite different than it was when I posted it here, although the last lines are the same. So glad you like it.

Martin Elster 10-29-2021 01:51 PM

I love it, Siham. Congrats!

Andrew Frisardi 10-30-2021 02:11 AM

This is great, Siham: Botticelli meets Jack Kerouac! Congratulations!

Bladderwracked,

Andrew

Siham Karami 11-01-2021 03:11 PM

Thanks, Martin and Andrew!! So glad you enjoyed it. It was a looong time coming. :)


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