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Joe Crocker

11-02-2022 10:01 AM

Autumn Sky

My villanelle "Where we put our mother" which I work-shopped here a couple of weeks ago is in today's Autumn Sky.

RCL	11-02-2022 11:41 AM

Bravo! Excellent work.

Carl Copeland

11-02-2022 12:02 PM

Yes, well done. My favorite L5 alone merits publication, not to mention the rest.

Susan McLean

11-02-2022 12:12 PM

I'm glad to see it find an appreciative audience.

Susan

David Callin

11-02-2022 01:04 PM

Great. Well done, Joe. I really like that one.

David

John Riley

11-02-2022 05:54 PM

Good one. I like that it builds a strong narrative instead of going in a circle.

Christine P'legion

11-27-2022 12:37 PM

Oh, I remember this one! Congrats on its publication :)

Jayne Osborn

11-27-2022 03:24 PM

Oh, YES!!!
Congratulations, Joe. I really loved this one. On your original thread I wrote that I was "blown away" by the poem. Now I see that you cleverly changed "disease" to "dis-ease". OMG - I'm blown away even more. That's inspired!

Well done. In ****ing spades! :D

Jayne

Joe Crocker

11-28-2022 06:54 AM

Thanks guys, and thanks especially to Jayne for liking the hyphen!

Jayne Osborn

11-28-2022 01:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joe Crocker (Post 485923)

Thanks guys, and thanks especially to Jayne for liking the hyphen!

Never have I liked a hyphen more, Joe! :D

Jayne

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