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John Riley 06-05-2023 08:51 AM

Dead Mule
 
Five poems I workshopped here are up at The Dead Mule. Thanks for the help.

https://deadmule.com/john-riley-five...redible-poems/

Matt Q 06-05-2023 10:04 AM

Congrats John!

Great to see so many of your poems in one place. They work really well together. I remember enjoying four of these at Sphere, though "Owl" is new to me.

Matt

P.S. There seems to be a formatting issue with The Colonel's Last Battlefield.

Carl Copeland 06-05-2023 11:27 AM

“Fighting Men at the Liquor House” was the first or one of the first of yours I read on the Sphere, and I’ve been breathlessly trying to keep up ever since as you soared from those unforgettable tall cane chairs through stratosphere and fantasy and back to earth for a bit. And that’s just the cycle I’ve been witness to. Thanks for keeping me surprised and off balance, John!

Christine P'legion 06-05-2023 02:43 PM

John, wow. These poems are riveting -- esp. "White Lies". (I'm Matt's opposite; "Owl" I remembered but the rest were new to me.)

There is a typo in the last line of your statement ("like" should be "liked").

John Riley 06-09-2023 09:31 AM

Thanks you for reading them.


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