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Unread 04-02-2009, 08:37 PM
Rhina P. Espaillat Rhina P. Espaillat is offline
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I like this poem so much that I wish the hiccup weren't there in line 6, in the extra syllable of "symmetrically." That line above all, I think, should have been perfect. But aside from that quibble, and excellent sonnet, with all the right details.
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