Thread: Into His Hand
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Unread 04-03-2009, 06:52 AM
Janet Kenny Janet Kenny is offline
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I really like this odd sonnet. The line that catches me is L7. I can make it work but I have to have several runs at it. I love Ls 5 & 6.
I don't experience discomfort with the pronouns. Oddly moving.
Janet
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