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Unread 04-04-2009, 11:54 AM
T.S. Kerrigan T.S. Kerrigan is offline
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I agree that the word "corporeal" stands out like a sore thumb. The contraction "I've" in the sestet doesn't connect up with "see" in the same line.
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